Oh no! What a terrible ending to a wonderful sounding holiday!
Jack, I love that you have used such vivid descriptions in your entry for this weeks 100 word challenge. Make sure that you edit your work carefully, though, as there are a few mistakes. However, none of your mistakes are as big as a landing strip full of cars 🙂
I look forward to reading more of your entries.
Mrs Petersen (Team 100WC) Australia
Fabulous description and use of onomatopoeia. Make sure you think about your adjectives though. Can a jet be both golden and silver?
Oh no! What a terrible ending to a wonderful sounding holiday!
Jack, I love that you have used such vivid descriptions in your entry for this weeks 100 word challenge. Make sure that you edit your work carefully, though, as there are a few mistakes. However, none of your mistakes are as big as a landing strip full of cars 🙂
I look forward to reading more of your entries.
Mrs Petersen (Team 100WC) Australia