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1. vgutmann says:

   February 2, 2015 at 5:41 pm

   Some great vocabulary, I especially like ‘roaming’ and ‘maniacs’. Well done on the speech marks but don’t forget the rest of your speech punctuation. E.g.So I bolted home saying to my mum, “There’s been a car crash !” So I ran…
2. ratth says:

   February 15, 2015 at 12:31 pm

   good vocabulary and good use of speech marks. from heather and holly

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