my day in prison

2 Responses to my day in prison

1. vgutmann says:

   January 31, 2015 at 12:10 pm

   This is a fantastic piece of descriptive writing Billy. Great vocabulary and I like the sentence that starts with an ‘ing’ word. Well done. Remember to put a comma before and after the drop in clause. E.g. I beg you, whoever you are reading this very document, that you will free me…
2. billy says:

   February 6, 2015 at 9:52 am

   Thanks =D

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