Holly the light was so bright

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3 Responses to Holly the light was so bright

  1. vgutmann says:

    Lovely simile Holly and I like your use of venomous. Read through your work before you publish to make sure it makes sense.

  2. Miss McKellar (Team 100 WC) says:

    Well done Holly! I especially liked the simile at the beginning, and the way you used capitals for an important part of a sentence. Keep up the great work!
    -Miss McKellar

  3. Mrs Dee (100WC Team) says:

    Is this piece finished Holly? It seemed a little short. I like the way you have set the scene and continued on in the same jungle setting.

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