Lovely simile Holly and I like your use of venomous. Read through your work before you publish to make sure it makes sense.
Well done Holly! I especially liked the simile at the beginning, and the way you used capitals for an important part of a sentence. Keep up the great work!
Is this piece finished Holly? It seemed a little short. I like the way you have set the scene and continued on in the same jungle setting.
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