revenge of the zombies hair part 2

2 Responses to revenge of the zombies hair part 2

1. vgutmann says:

   November 28, 2014 at 4:54 pm

   Good description, I like ‘malevolent’ and use of speech marks but please add the comas, full stops etc required at the beginning and end of the speech.
2. thevideogameplayer says:

   December 18, 2014 at 9:13 am

   Thank you!

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