A good start Daniel and good use of speech. Don’t forget the comma at the end of the speech. I think you mean peak, not pecks and also were not was. Don’t forget full stops and capital letters at the beginning of a sentence.
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A good start Daniel and good use of speech. Don’t forget the comma at the end of the speech. I think you mean peak, not pecks and also were not was. Don’t forget full stops and capital letters at the beginning of a sentence.