Hello Maryam, this is an interesting response to the picture. I like how you showed how widespread the terror was by saying it was all of America and providing examples of what was happening. You have used some “wow” words to make your story interesting and to paint a picture. Words like: churning, fiercer, annihilation. You have even used a metaphor to describe the actions of the storm. Well done.
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