Hi Luke,
Colossal is a fabulous word. Lots of the students in my class associated it with this picture also. You have excellent personal voice that I can hear throughout your writing. Maybe refrain from using so many exclamation marks in the future, save them for when you really want to emphasis something.
Keep writing,
Mrs Horan (Team 100WC) Morrinsville, New Zealand
Luke great work
Well done for congratulating yourself!
Hi Luke,
Colossal is a fabulous word. Lots of the students in my class associated it with this picture also. You have excellent personal voice that I can hear throughout your writing. Maybe refrain from using so many exclamation marks in the future, save them for when you really want to emphasis something.
Keep writing,
Mrs Horan (Team 100WC) Morrinsville, New Zealand