one dark day

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  1. phaylock says:

    See me for help on linking as you haven’t done it correctly.

    Great ideas and writing Oliver. I love the word ‘strolling’. Instead of ‘he told’ you could have used ‘demanded’. In the 100WC really think hard about your word choices and use the best words you can.

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