the wizard

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6 Responses to the wizard

  1. Albert says:

    You should change the e to he, and put an ‘ at the word devils.

  2. Tyler says:

    Good job. Did you get the name Voldomalty from Voldemort? Keep up the good work.

  3. Brett says:

    I think it was just an amazing story and good details

  4. Cate says:

    This is great! It kind of reminds me of The Girl Who Drank the Moon, with the “city of sorrows” theme. Good job, I hope to see a Part Two in a few weeks!

  5. Juju Zhao says:

    Very Nice! I love the story idea but what is the “e” in the second line?

  6. Albert says:

    Change the e to he. Leave a space between awoken and by. Leave of between the all and the. Change the to to into. Capitalize the D in Devils and the F in Forest

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