ooh nice! I love the spooky twist. (well, not TWIST, but I still love it) And the stones spying was a great idea!
I am really impressed with the backstory you have managed to develop in such few words! I also really like the ambiguous ending that leaves the reader wondering what might happen next…
One thing you might want to do next time is double check that you have used capital letters correctly.
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Mel Wells (Team100)
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