The seven creped out ninja status ever! By Joanne

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3 Responses to The seven creped out ninja status ever! By Joanne

  1. Jackie Cameron says:

    Ooh Joanne, This certainly must have been a weird experience for you. I am not surprised that you were frightened. I wonder where they went on to after they disappeared from your back garden.
    You might find that if you write your story into a Word doc first that there will be help with your spelling. You can then copy your work over to your blog post. Perhaps you could talk to your teacher about this?
    Thanks for sharing,
    Jackie (Team 100 WC)
    New Zealand

  2. Jackie Cameron says:

    Hi Joanne,
    I too would find it totally weird if seven ninjas suddenly appeared! I wonder what really happened to your trees.
    Do you think your first sentence would read better if you had simply said “One morning there were seven …….’ instead of One day .. then adding ‘in the morning’. What do you think?
    Thanks for being so creative with this prompt.
    Jackie (Team 100WC)
    New Plymouth
    New Zealand

  3. Cate says:

    Wow, the ninja statues enmagicked the trees to move themselves?!?!?!?!? What?! I love the “not actual moving trees, but instead they are statues” thing.

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