Hi Ruby
Thank you for sharing your writing with us. I really enjoyed the description of this place. It certainly sounded very creepy! Had this place always feel so strange to your character as they describe it as their favourite place? If it had suddenly changed, what do you think had made the creatures come out and try to entrap your character?
Keep up the great writing!
Ms McKenzie (Team 100WC Christchurch, New Zealand)
Hi Ruby
Thank you for sharing your writing with us. I really enjoyed the description of this place. It certainly sounded very creepy! Had this place always feel so strange to your character as they describe it as their favourite place? If it had suddenly changed, what do you think had made the creatures come out and try to entrap your character?
Keep up the great writing!
Ms McKenzie (Team 100WC Christchurch, New Zealand)