Hello,
Stealing the crown jewels is quite a caper. The story reminds me of a James Bond movie. Your word choices fit your genre perfectly. Selections like ‘operation’ mission’ ‘deceived’ and ‘stealth’ are great ones for a crime story.
Be certain to use the whole prompt in your writing. You mentioned stuffing the jewels down the pipe, but the prompt was ‘it came down the drainpipe’. It can be really challenging to make it work. I wonder if you could have had some part of the gadgets you needed to use come down a drainpipe.
Thank you for sharing your story,
Gina Ruffcorn (Team 100, Iowa USA)
Hello,
Stealing the crown jewels is quite a caper. The story reminds me of a James Bond movie. Your word choices fit your genre perfectly. Selections like ‘operation’ mission’ ‘deceived’ and ‘stealth’ are great ones for a crime story.
Be certain to use the whole prompt in your writing. You mentioned stuffing the jewels down the pipe, but the prompt was ‘it came down the drainpipe’. It can be really challenging to make it work. I wonder if you could have had some part of the gadgets you needed to use come down a drainpipe.
Thank you for sharing your story,
Gina Ruffcorn (Team 100, Iowa USA)