Really great story Hailey! I loved how you used the present tense as it made me feel like I was actually in Royal Family Park standing with those statues as the sun set, and I really liked your plot line about the three brave children which has a lot of depth and instills admiration in these children. Your vivid description also set the scene perfectly, and it was nice to read that the bravery of these children is behind honoured through the statues. Very well done!
Really great story Hailey! I absolutely loved how you used the present tense as it made me feel as if I was actually stood in Royal Family Park with the three statues admiring the sunset, and your vivid description set the scene perfectly. I also really liked your plot line about the three brave children as it instills admiration in their selfless act, and it was nice to read that their bravery was being honoured through these statues. Very well done!
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