A really great piece of descriptive writing, the crocodile sounds lovely – cute and soft! It’s a shame they forgot their lunch and had to eat a pepper!! I look forward to reading more!
I really liked how you used adjectives to describe the crocodile. What happened when Ray Ray found out that Mia forgot the lunch? It would make an interesting story to see how innovative you were with what you had. Maybe you picked berries. Keep working hard!
You forgot orange. An interesting story but please remember CAPITAL LETTERS at the beginning of your sentences.
A really great piece of descriptive writing, the crocodile sounds lovely – cute and soft! It’s a shame they forgot their lunch and had to eat a pepper!! I look forward to reading more!
I really liked how you used adjectives to describe the crocodile. What happened when Ray Ray found out that Mia forgot the lunch? It would make an interesting story to see how innovative you were with what you had. Maybe you picked berries. Keep working hard!
ok sorry
lovely story . did you save me any chocolate cake xx lol
did you have a nice time at the zoo ?
this is very colourful