What a great story. You have used some great words, I especially like ‘devastated’ and ‘searched high and low’. Try to use the pronoun ‘he’ instead of the proper noun ‘Pepper’ sometimes to make it easier to read.
You have used some super vocabulary in your story. You give the reader a clear picture of the scene. I hope Pepper managed to get some lunch eventually. Keep up the good work with the 100WC.
What a great story. You have used some great words, I especially like ‘devastated’ and ‘searched high and low’. Try to use the pronoun ‘he’ instead of the proper noun ‘Pepper’ sometimes to make it easier to read.
You have used some super vocabulary in your story. You give the reader a clear picture of the scene. I hope Pepper managed to get some lunch eventually. Keep up the good work with the 100WC.
thank you i will remember for next time xx
that story is awesome i want to meet pepper
cooooooooooooool