Interesting story with some great language. I love the fact that he was only slightly weird! Remember to use a comma when the subordinate clause is at the end of the sentence. E.g. The only object that was around him was a bottle of fragrance that smelt disgusting, a bit like pepper.
So I guess this story was a collaboration of Josh & Keanan. Good imagination, but be sure to double check your punctuation, i.e., use of periods & commas. Keep up the good work with your Team 100wc challenges.
Interesting story with some great language. I love the fact that he was only slightly weird! Remember to use a comma when the subordinate clause is at the end of the sentence. E.g. The only object that was around him was a bottle of fragrance that smelt disgusting, a bit like pepper.
So I guess this story was a collaboration of Josh & Keanan. Good imagination, but be sure to double check your punctuation, i.e., use of periods & commas. Keep up the good work with your Team 100wc challenges.