Well done on your writing Joanne.
It isn’t easy to write a story with only 100 words but you managed very well.
I really like how you describe what is happening. You had my attention from the start but your last two sentences were brilliant. Really grabbed my attention and got me thinking.
Your writing is quite well organised and you’ve taken care with spellings and grammar. Take care when using dialogue though. The punctuation for it is quite dufficult and it doesn’t always add a lot
to a story.
I would love to know what happens next…..
Looking forward to reading your writing in the future.
Keep up the good work !
Well done on your writing Joanne.
It isn’t easy to write a story with only 100 words but you managed very well.
I really like how you describe what is happening. You had my attention from the start but your last two sentences were brilliant. Really grabbed my attention and got me thinking.
Your writing is quite well organised and you’ve taken care with spellings and grammar. Take care when using dialogue though. The punctuation for it is quite dufficult and it doesn’t always add a lot
to a story.
I would love to know what happens next…..
Looking forward to reading your writing in the future.
Keep up the good work !
Shane, Teacher
Dublin, Ireland
(Team 100)
thank you for all the things you said
thank you
from joanne