A very imaginative entry. I would love to now what a “domminy defender” is, as I felt that I needed to know this to understand the story. You have some great words in this, like “stares,” “plummets” and “hooded.” Next time, make sure that you check your sentence punctuation carefully as it would make it easier to read. Keep up the good work!
A very imaginative entry. I would love to now what a “domminy defender” is, as I felt that I needed to know this to understand the story. You have some great words in this, like “stares,” “plummets” and “hooded.” Next time, make sure that you check your sentence punctuation carefully as it would make it easier to read. Keep up the good work!