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1. Anonymous says:

   September 15, 2017 at 5:46 pm

   I like that you used punctuation from ellie.
2. phaylock says:

   September 16, 2017 at 7:48 am

   Well done Ruby, I liked your use of creepy and dark to describe the flat. However I think it would sound better as:

   What lay ahead of us? My friend Taya and I dared to walk through the creepy, dark flat.

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