A great scary account Philip, well done. Your use of describing words really helps me to build a picture of what is happening. Don’t forget to use apostrophes for possession. (Jack’s sword belongs to him!)
Hi Philip – I love this story. You have created a brilliant picture using the nouns and adjectives to describe the sounds of what is happening. I wonder who the old man is?
A great scary account Philip, well done. Your use of describing words really helps me to build a picture of what is happening. Don’t forget to use apostrophes for possession. (Jack’s sword belongs to him!)
Hi Philip – I love this story. You have created a brilliant picture using the nouns and adjectives to describe the sounds of what is happening. I wonder who the old man is?
Sherry (Team 100)