get rekt

Posted on May 1, 2015 by Deleted User
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1 Response to get rekt

  1. vgutmann says:
    May 5, 2015 at 11:11 am

    A good start that really grabs the reader’s attention. The first sentence is far too long, it will make more sense if you separate it into two or three individual sentences. E.g. ….feast your eyes on Larry the outstanding lion. He will be…

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