Well done for entering the challenge boys but you haven’t include the phrase ‘but it turned yellow’ The point of the challenge is you have to include that phrase.
Also, think of your audience, make sure you use capital letters and full stops in the correct place to help us read your writing and understand your story.
You two have great imaginations – but remember to follow the criteria – and that was to use the 100 word challenge prompt ‘But it is yellow.’ I think it would have worked well with the ideas that you had about a superhero.
Good use of capital letters to make some words stand out.
Remember to re-read your story to make sure that it makes sense and that you haven’t missed important punctuation out.
Well done for entering the challenge boys but you haven’t include the phrase ‘but it turned yellow’ The point of the challenge is you have to include that phrase.
Also, think of your audience, make sure you use capital letters and full stops in the correct place to help us read your writing and understand your story.
Mr Haylock.
You two have great imaginations – but remember to follow the criteria – and that was to use the 100 word challenge prompt ‘But it is yellow.’ I think it would have worked well with the ideas that you had about a superhero.
Good use of capital letters to make some words stand out.
Remember to re-read your story to make sure that it makes sense and that you haven’t missed important punctuation out.