How funny, as part of my Team 100WC job I have been given your blog post to comment on!
Well done for including the prompt and what a good idea to write it as a set of instructions. I like the good adjectives you have used. I think you need a connective in your last sentence before ‘you will see the x’
Great instructions. You have used bossy verbs and lots of interesting adjectives, well done.
Hi Rachael,
How funny, as part of my Team 100WC job I have been given your blog post to comment on!
Well done for including the prompt and what a good idea to write it as a set of instructions. I like the good adjectives you have used. I think you need a connective in your last sentence before ‘you will see the x’