A good start but you should have got more work done in the time given. A good idea to tell the story from the point of view of the dog. Please finish it off and include some description of why the statues are there.
Good start of your story for this week. Try to push yourself to add more details and information. I would also suggest that you make sure to read through your post before you publish. That way you can make sure that it not only makes sense, but you also have included all of the correct punctuation in your writing. Keep up the hard work.
A good start but you should have got more work done in the time given. A good idea to tell the story from the point of view of the dog. Please finish it off and include some description of why the statues are there.
Billy,
Good start of your story for this week. Try to push yourself to add more details and information. I would also suggest that you make sure to read through your post before you publish. That way you can make sure that it not only makes sense, but you also have included all of the correct punctuation in your writing. Keep up the hard work.
Ms. Ferri
100 WC Team