the dog from time

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2 Responses to the dog from time

  1. vgutmann says:

    Some good ideas and I like the way that you have added information to your sentences using brackets. Remember not to get to involved explaining the background of your story as you never get to the interesting part which is the story itself!

  2. Tricia says:

    You have used a really interesting period of time and used vocabulary that is related to that time. Do not forget to proofread your work and use punctuations at the end of sentences.

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