hollys diary entery

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  1. vgutmann says:

    Good ideas and good use of speech in your 100wc. You have used speech marks well but remember to punctuate the beginning and end of the speech as well. E.g.
    and said, “As we went to London I saw three statues, so I am trying to come up with some ideas.”
    You have also used the word whisper twice could you replace one of them with something else?

  2. bryony says:

    well done

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