Felicity 5SC W12

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2 Responses to Felicity 5SC W12

  1. phaylock says:

    Well done Felicity, your punctuation is excellent and I really like the conversation you have created. Next time see if you can include an adverb. For example you could have said the dog jumped quickly into the sea.

  2. Mrs. Weeks says:

    Very good punctuation Felicity. Need to get some of our Year 6’s to look at that. I like the way you have linked all your characters together. Well done!

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