Well done Gracie! We enjoyed your story, although some of the boys didn’t like the kissing!
From Miss B and the Year 2’s at St Lawrence Primary, Australia
Well done Gracie, a happy ending to your five sentence challenge. Great punctuation of your sentences. I’m interested to know why the man was silly. Next time he might do something that is silly.
I enjoyed reading your 5 sentence challenge. Your spelling and punctuation is very good.
Just a little tip for you, I would have written ‘The dog was barking AT the man…’
A lovely, cheerful short story. Good use of the photo prompt.
Mrs W, Team 5 SC
Well Gracie, I love a romantic story. I like the way the changed your sentence openers and that you explain how your characters are feeling. Next time I wouldn’t finish with a quick sentence. Think about what he might have said when she kissed him.
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