Gracie 5Sc Week11

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4 Responses to Gracie 5Sc Week11

  1. forrb says:

    Well done

    from Brooke

  2. phaylock says:

    Well done Gracie, a great piece of writing about Sloths in the jungle. Great sentence punctuation for all 5 sentences. Next time try to think of 5 different ways to start each sentence.

  3. pestf says:

    fan tastick.

  4. Mrs. Weeks says:

    Interesting creature to write about. Next time think of using a different connective to ‘because’ for example ‘as’ or ‘due to’. I like to the way you have expanded your sentences. Well done Gracie.

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