Well done Gracie, a great piece of writing about Sloths in the jungle. Great sentence punctuation for all 5 sentences. Next time try to think of 5 different ways to start each sentence.
Interesting creature to write about. Next time think of using a different connective to ‘because’ for example ‘as’ or ‘due to’. I like to the way you have expanded your sentences. Well done Gracie.
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