brooke5sc week11

Posted on March 11, 2015 by Deleted User
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5 Responses to brooke5sc week11

  1. phaylock says:
    March 11, 2015 at 9:48 pm

    I think I would run as well Brooke! Good description of what you saw, heard and smelt in the jungle. Great idea to use the capital letters to show me that the roar was loud! I also like your picture. Well done.

  2. pestf says:
    March 12, 2015 at 8:28 am

    Lovely lion.

  3. forrb says:
    March 13, 2015 at 1:11 pm

    thank you

  4. Mrs. Weeks says:
    March 21, 2015 at 3:59 pm

    I love the way you have created drama in your short poem and with a very clever picture too! Well done.

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