brooke5sc week11

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5 Responses to brooke5sc week11

  1. phaylock says:

    I think I would run as well Brooke! Good description of what you saw, heard and smelt in the jungle. Great idea to use the capital letters to show me that the roar was loud! I also like your picture. Well done.

  2. pestf says:

    Lovely lion.

  3. forrb says:

    thank you

  4. Mrs. Weeks says:

    I love the way you have created drama in your short poem and with a very clever picture too! Well done.

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