DEAR BIARY

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  1. vgutmann says:

    This is a good idea for a story Holly and I like your use of the word ‘lurking’. Make sure you read through your work to make sure it flows well and makes sense before you publish. Also make sure you use punctuation when including speech. E.g. The man said to my friend, “What was that I could feel on the floor?”

  2. ratth says:

    thank you for that I keep it in mind Mrs Gutmann

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